Teaser trailer
Here is the draft teaser trailer for the Enigma, a story about a characters deep and dangerous obsession with his one and only 'love'.
Draft
I am happy with it due to the fact that for what it's worth we completed the task and had some interesting angles and a unique story. I feel that it would be suitable for our audience and the feedback I have received has been positive. Obviously, there are things I can change such as a few editing (particularly the transitions), the music and particularly when it should dip. However, for the most part it's tense and creates an auroa of mystery as to who is the Enigma and what does he exactly want. I've learnt a lot from this process and that's the best thing to take out of it.
Edit:The draft version was deleted by someone, I apologise.
Edit:The draft version was deleted by someone, I apologise.
Final edition
This edit fixed some of the missing transitions and overall pace. I think the plot surrounding who the Enigma is is a still mystery. His dialogue towards the end "a card can say too much without saying anything at all" is a lot clearer this time around. It's an effective line because it symbolises what we've done by not showing his identity. So his presence is enough to signify that something is wrong, much like the joker card. There are various soundtracks this time around, to fit the different stages of the teaser. It starts of quite ambient, before slowly the pace and intensity increases. It works, however there maybe could have been two soundtracks organised in a different order. The ending is ambiguous, and I feel it is enough to keep the audience wanting more, hopefully drawing them in.